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Improving Skills - Part 25 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 25 by BCRich40
Two and a half months... It took two and a half months get this comic done. Way too long! If I would have released this comic a month and a half ago, I would be happy with it, but now... Well, let's just say that I don't like it.

There are so many things wrong with this installment! Dialogue is fine (thanks to Mudpony), but visually it looks horrible. I mean, it looks better than the previous part. The problem is that I can draw better than that nowadays. So the comic just looks too outdated when you compare it to my current drawing skills, and that's why I don't like it.

At least I got it ready! Now I can start working on with the next part. Don't worry, it will be ready faster than this one since I have a lot more time on my hands now. You can find "a progress bar" from my profile page, if you want to know how the next comic is coming together.

And before I forgot, I like to thank my proofreader, :iconmudpony:!

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:iconrbd9510:
RBD9510 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016
*wingboner* damn not again
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:iconlunchymunchies:
lunchymunchies Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016
Why is Twilight such an asshole in this?
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
ITs my job. Like its my job to be the one everyone abandons :)
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:iconlupus1970:
lupus1970 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2015
Gotta agree with Dashie. Twilight is hot!
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
No im not..
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
Man, Twilight was such a bitch in the first panels.
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
Thanks for the compliment :)
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner May 29, 2017
Well, bitch might be overshot, but she was really obnoxious and manipulative.
I almost wanted to see Dashie leaping at her and slapping her for her mean behaviour.

(Yes, I am quite one for expeditive measures. :-) )
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
Eh, so everyone else is allowed to do it to me,but the minute I do it, I have to be punished for it?
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2017
Link Botw Icon F2U Well, excuuuuse me, Princess, but just because others do it doesn't mean that you can too.

The Raspberry Returns EqG Fluffle Puff 
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
HRH-Twilight-Sparkle Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017
And yet, Im suppose ti forgive them for it?
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017
I didn't mean that. Not that fast, at least.

I just meant that just because others do it doesn't mean that you can too.
I just meant that. Nothing more, nothing less.

Say... I don't remember Lyra being a pain in the bottom, before that incident...
:shrug:Ah well
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
HRH-Twilight-Sparkle Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2017
But it's hard to always be the nice one.
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:iconthetrefoiler:
TheTrefoiler Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
And now the tables have turned: Twilight is wrestling with the literal genie while everyone else has a casual conversation about a conspiracy to take over Equestria using sleeper agents. Oh, this comic... :D

I would say Twilight got what was coming to her, but let's face it... what she did was funny. At least Twilight got some chocolate out of it... :lol:

As for technical critique, the comic could look better, yes, but it getting better all the time, and you're already very skillfully using your camera angles, which I think makes for a much better presentation than just being really good at drawing. :nod:
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:iconanimatorsnake:
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
indeed lyra
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:icontygrahof:
Tygrahof Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015
That last panel is just precious!!! HA HA!!! Rainbow you dog, you!
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:icongmsod:
GMSOD Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
awwwww... Dash didn't even get wingboner...¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I think Dash is about to lose all her self control soon
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:iconnecromancerking85:
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Why is it so difficult to come up with the idea for the comic (ancient pony colony on the moon It is too stupid idea,evil multinational companies operating in the hidden government agency is even worse, and even not original,Zebra cannibal tribe that lives in the Everfree Forest no no no I simply ran out of ideas) stupid useless brain :(
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:iconphcool23:
Phcool23 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
Im gussseing Twilight was asking for cream?
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:iconlpsstarshine:
LPSStarShine Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
NO. just. no (not offending )
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:iconfuzzydash101:
FuzzyDash101 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice wings Rainbow
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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
As they say. The lord works in mysterious ways.... and sometimes, not so mysterious.
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:iconpurple-acid1299:
Purple-Acid1299 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like twilight's mane in the wind
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
so does rainbow
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:iconpurple-acid1299:
Purple-Acid1299 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes i can see that XD
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
ya but I know rainbow wants twilight to taste the rainbow if you know what I mean
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
Just, just stop.
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Edited Oct 7, 2017
buttttt whyyyyyyyy
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:iconhrh-twilight-sparkle:
HRH-Twilight-Sparkle Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017
No. Just no no
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:iconpurple-acid1299:
Purple-Acid1299 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes i know what you mean XD
still i can't stop thinking about twilight's mane in the wind it's the only thing on my mind now
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
look at some more are like this one vandreadman.deviantart.com/art… will help you get that out of your head
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:iconpurple-acid1299:
Purple-Acid1299 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i still can't get twilight's mane out of my head
but thx for trying 
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:iconvandreadman:
vandreadman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
well that sucks ok how about this one then loceri.deviantart.com/art/MLP-…
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Is the reason cause you're putting more detail into the world?
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:iconsturmlion1:
Sturmlion1 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Yeah, we know which way Rainbow Dash is going to go.
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:iconbabyjoshy5:
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uhhh... I have a no idea what the buals is going on... except that they broke the 4th wall knowing that you make the comic basically.
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:iconthebarhalofan197:
TheBARHalofan197 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww dang this has to be without a doubt the best thing I have ever seen in my entire life!!! I love the pairing for some reason and it's just amazing how you get better and better each time. Fantastic job and I can't wait for the next page...OH SO EXCITED!!! :excited:
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:iconwaveofart:
WaveofArt Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
AWESOME I NEED MORE!
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:iconrefferee:
refferee Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Poke, poke, poke, any progress so far with the next part? Just asking since I decided to randomly pop in
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:iconallsmiles98311:
Allsmiles98311 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
 (I have enjoyed catching up with this series, and watching the progression. I look forward to the next one, when it arrives.)
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:icontwidash123em:
twidash123em Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
HOW DARE YOU I AM DISAPPOINTED oh AND WHEN IS the next coming
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:icongarfield0550:
Garfield0550 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
go to his profile and read it...youŽll find out
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:icontwidash123em:
twidash123em Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i um i'm sorry but i am helping someone so if you find out when the next is i will be online ok
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:iconsuperbrony79:
SuperBrony79 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dont be lazy and just check it, geez.
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:iconpinkiepartypie1000:
Pinkiepartypie1000 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Please dude hurry it up already I am getting board can some pony tell me when the next one is out!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeas!!!!!!
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:iconbcrich40:
BCRich40 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're getting a board? Congratulations! Is it a skateboard or perhaps a surfboard? If not, what kind of board it is then?
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Pinkiepartypie1000 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ok funny but when is the next one comeing out have you given up if so please don't u can do I for fans just like me and all the other ponys who have read your comics xxx Wink/Razz :D (Big Grin) :) (Smile) 
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:iconbcrich40:
BCRich40 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ponies are reading my comic series too? I didn't know that they have become so smart!

But seriously though, I have no idea when the next part is coming out. I had artist's block that lasted a couple of months and it messed up everything. Hopefully I'll get part 26 done during this month.
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:iconpinkiepartypie1000:
Pinkiepartypie1000 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Great, can't wait to read it !!!!!
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