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Improving Skills - Part 7 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 7 by BCRich40
Here is the next part of my pony comic. Forgive me my bad language, but this part looks shit. Why? Because I used old sketches. I tried to improve them while I was transffering them to digital format, but it just made things worse.

Fortunately, I don't have any old sketches for this series anymore. Next part should look way better.

And as always, feel free to point out any grammatical errors you can find. It helps me to improve my English skills.

PART 8

PART 6

PART 1


My Little Pony Hasbro
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:iconkotkadxx:
kotkadxx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
LYRA!!!!! ^^
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:iconyoshidash:
YoshiDash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
Lyraa!
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:iconbeartone678:
beartone678 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Omg Lyra! I am so happy
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:iconkatthecat2602:
katthecat2602 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
Don't listen to him, he has brought me so many hate messages.
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:iconthe-rainbron3:
the-rainbron3 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ANTHROPOLOGY!
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:icon987654321o:
987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
creeper
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:iconforestfire7890:
ForestFire7890 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Minecraft one? Where?
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:iconmeto30:
meto30 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know this will sound like a broken record but...


Yay! Lyra! XD
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:icon123cupcake:
123cupcake Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
LOL!!!!!!!!

how did I know that Lyra would come in at roughly the word 'humans'?
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:iconnipkips:
nipkips Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
the look on their faces  xD
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:iconsaritasmith2013:
saritasmith2013 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
WHERE THE HAY DID LYRA COME FROM?!?!?!?!Lyra Heartstrings Emote 
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I asked te same meanwhile I laugh
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:iconlightningboltsuprise:
LightningBoltSuprise Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Artist
when you mention humans, Lyra will be there
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:icondante-wynter:
Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Yay! Lyra!
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Keep doubting, twilight, and you're going to the glue factory. 
Rainbow factory doesn't have shit on Elmer's.
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:iconghalaghor:
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
here is lyra!
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:iconsweetymimy22:
sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
hahahahaha funny funny funny funny
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the way Twilight sits when reading books. :aww:
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
...wouldn't it hurt though.. I watched my dog try and sit like it and it just looked so awkward.
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, horses sit like that in real life, with their legs tucked under their body.

fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/201…

I don't know why, but I find it adorable. :)
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
yeah i know i've seen it myself and it is quite interesting to know that horses/ponies aren't the only ones to sit like it.
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Wait, Lyra in a panel without Bon Bon? :iconimpossibruplz:
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:iconkwark85:
kwark85 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I don't get what's up with Lyra Heartstrings and humans.

Please enlighten me.
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:iconjohnflaherty:
JohnFlaherty Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's a bit late, but oh well.

It all started when, on one episode, Lyra was sitting on a bench like a human.

From there, a meme was created about Lyra wanting to be a human, which in turn originated the "Lyra wants hands" meme.
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
translation its mostly fan-made rumors, with no real evidence aside from the single mentioned episode.
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I'm not sure where it originated from either. I just go with it.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This keeps getting better.
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lololol XD
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:iconbamart19:
BAMART19 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
No! Maybe. GIVE ME BACK MY HANDS!
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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Oh no. RUN!!!!! :XD:
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:iconahmadsyar:
ahmadsyar Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
AWW HELL NO
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:iconcayleycom:
cayleycom Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
HAHAHAA! I love each new one of these!
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:iconponkool4:
Ponkool4 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Oh, Lyra Wink/Razz . I can't wait for them to explore our world - they're in for a surprise!
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Congratulations, Twilight! You've learned "Summon Lyra"!
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LYRAAAAA!
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:iconenchantiaheartstring:
EnchantiaHeartstring Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Student Writer
YAY LYRAS HERE!!! THE PARTY HAS STARTED
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:iconsporex2-paints:
sporex2-paints Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
We have been captured by the humans!
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:icontruecere:
truecere Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
see called him Mr. creator tell me that my theory is wrong tell me it isn't true wait you can't T MAN out.*so lame*:l
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:icontori-the-eevee1234:
Tori-the-Eevee1234 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlyrahumansplz:
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
That icon is amazing! XD
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:icontori-the-eevee1234:
Tori-the-Eevee1234 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlyramotherofgodplz:
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
:iconmotherofcelestiaplz:
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:icontori-the-eevee1234:
Tori-the-Eevee1234 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbrohoof1plz:
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
:iconbrohoof2plz:
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:iconkanteviler:
KanteViler Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Random Lyra FTW!
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:iconcinderel345:
cinderel345 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
where....hahahhahahhahaha where did she come from?
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:iconthegreatwalholio:
thegreatwalholio Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
:XD:
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:iconcatz537:
catz537 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Panel 5: Twi should say "As I said, there are weird things mentioned in this book. Most of the time it speaks of the planet, how the weather has a mind of its own, animals know how to take care of themselves..." Panel 6: Twi: "The book says that on the surface of this planet lives over 7 billion things called humans". and Dash: "Did you say humans?". and in the last panel, maybe have Lyra say "humans" too, so it makes more sense. (:
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lizzyliz1 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
oh u lyra who made you love humans XDD
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