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Improving Skills - Part 4 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 4 by BCRich40
The Fourth part of my first pony comic. Now with colours!

I think my English is poor, so I apologize in advance. Feel free to point out errors.

PART 5

PART 3

PART 1


My Little Pony Hasbro
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:iconthe-rainbron3:
the-rainbron3 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
rainbow is a alcoholic 
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:iconkotkadxx:
kotkadxx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
;O
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:iconthe-rainbron3:
the-rainbron3 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
she is also straight or asexual with one exception... PINKIE PIE!!!  
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Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Seems like I often say what Twilight does in the last panel to my friends.  By they way - your English is fine.
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:iconasti-friend:
asti-friend Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Praise the lord for this endless madness
lol what a praise XD
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Now that I think about it, that was probably Applejack that she drank if made from apples, or just beer as indicated from the style.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
well to be fair she just asked for cider she didn't detail what kind should appear.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If you were at someone's house and asked them for something to drink, would you expect to receive a mug of suspicious-smelling orange-gold liquid?
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
If I asked for Cider, most likely because that's the usual color (and mostly likely smell) of most cider beverages.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If you've ever had an alcoholic beverage, you'd know that they have a distinct smell. It's not exactly appropriate in society to give someone an alcoholic drink, unless they ask for one or you're in a bar anyway and feel like being generous.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
I've had half a bottle of some sort of mixed "Alcoholic blue cordial" but I've never truly touched the stuff since because of how horrid it stinks,
just from smelling an semi-empty bottle of the stuff (out of curiosity) and your statement is only half true if requested it is then up to your 'rational decision-making' as to whether you allow the asking person (in a bar or not) to have a drink knowing its risks and that your responsible for any outcome that follows afterward.
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not really. In a bar, people love it when you buy them drinks. I do believe this applies to pretty much all of the western world. It would actually be rude to refuse a drink when someone else is buying.

However, at someone's home, it is considered strange or creepy to give a guest an alcoholic beverage, and the chances are that they'll think you're trying to take advantage of them, since ethanol can severely inhibit a person's rational thinking/judgement.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
like I said earlier we don't know what a pony's alcoholic blood count would be either way, being a cartoon with Cider in it does mean they would have some form of resistance to the beverage.
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sweetymimy22 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
hahahahaha
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I think Twilight is just jealous because she didn't get any cider. =P
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I don't think so...
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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Was that 20% proof cider? :XD:
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's 20% cooler cider. 8-)
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Try 180 Proof. Or 20% Cider, 80% rubbing alcohol.
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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
Damn. She'll be so drunk that by morning Rainbow will be pushing up daisies if you know what I mean. :XD:
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Or just blind. And without a functioning liver.
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
this series is so creative
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shieldgenerator7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
this is hilarious.
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:iconponkool4:
Ponkool4 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Your English is pretty good, if you ask me. Nice job with the expressions
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Praise Discord! On this day, our lord of madness has been merciful!
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:iconhyginustus:
Hyginustus Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student
i wont cyder too
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DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
oh no
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ShadowtheHedgehog137 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
xD you win the internet!!!
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:iconlawlzers101:
lawlzers101 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Dashie got wasted..
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:iconjoelang123:
joelang123 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012
No its not poisonous... just achoholic
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:iconneutralbrony:
Neutralbrony Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lookin good so far! BOOOOOZE!
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:iconmysteryaphrodite:
mysteryAphrodite Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha "praise the creator of this endless madness! -bows- " LOLOL
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
good job here
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:iconneutralbrony:
Neutralbrony Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed!
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
yep
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razorsharpfang Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
English correction initialize!
1st panel: Twilight: "Colors" is a noun, and must have a particle, but since you're referring to definite colors, (the colors in the picture) you must use "The"
"Hey! The colors are back!" Just remember, if you're in America spell it "color" if you are not in America spell it "colour". A subtle difference, but it exists.

2nd panel: Rainbow Dash: Since "Cider" is a liquid, like water, you can't have a singularity of cider. Here you must use a different particle.
You could use "some": "Could I have some fresh cider if I ask nicely?", or you could use a quantitative particle.
"Could I have a mug of fresh cider if I ask nicely?". You should probably use the first one because it's shorter.

4th panel: Twilight: Nothing big, just "to" is the wrong word to use after recommend if you're recommending to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash is a person, and so would be addressed as "you". So just correct "to" to "you". Also, "Still" is wrong, because she never established a point. It's just not needed.
"I don't recommend you drink that!"

Keep posting!
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mass3ff3ct3 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
ah Ponies getting drunk on their non-alcoholic cider. Just awesome XD
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Rainbow-Gale Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Haven't ya ever heard of hard cider?
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sporex2-paints Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
The cider is alcoholic.
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