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It took a little longer this time, but it's finally here! A bit more serious part this time.
I have really mixed feelings about this part. There's one panel which has just about everything wrong, but otherwise this comic looks quite good. Don't get me wrong! I can still see some minor mistakes in it, but they aren't half as bad as they normally are. You can point out any visual errors if you want to, but it's pretty pointless, since I'm aware of most of them already. So the comic is visually quite okay, but the dialogue is... eh... pretty horrible actually. I had some problems with converting my thoughts into words. It wasn't the first time, and it probably won't be the last either... Better luck next time.
Big thanks to my pre-reader,
!
Enjoy!
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My Little Pony © Hasbro
I have really mixed feelings about this part. There's one panel which has just about everything wrong, but otherwise this comic looks quite good. Don't get me wrong! I can still see some minor mistakes in it, but they aren't half as bad as they normally are. You can point out any visual errors if you want to, but it's pretty pointless, since I'm aware of most of them already. So the comic is visually quite okay, but the dialogue is... eh... pretty horrible actually. I had some problems with converting my thoughts into words. It wasn't the first time, and it probably won't be the last either... Better luck next time.
Big thanks to my pre-reader,
!Enjoy!
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Previous Page
Part 1
My Little Pony © Hasbro
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I love how Book Horse skips to the middle of the book instead of starting at the beginning. Anyone else notice that? 