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Improving Skills - Part 22 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 22 by BCRich40
Twilight, my only weakness...

What should I say? There are some horrible panels, but there are some surprisingly good panels too. Nothing out of ordinary.

However, This part was quite pain in the ass to draw. After I got it half done, it started to feel that I need really badly a break from comic drawing. Not just a day or two long break like I usually have. More like a week or so. I'll make a short journal entry about it later.

Feel free to point out any visual errors, but it's pretty much waste of time, since I'm already aware of most of the problems.


Big thanks to my pre-reader, :iconmudpony:!

Enjoy!


Part 23

Part 21

Part 1


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:iconfinalsage:
FinalSage Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016
Twilight reading that book was beyond adorable
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:iconcryptid-daydreamers:
Cryptid-Daydreamers Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight. That book. 
Put it down. Twilight.
No.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
Why was Dashie avoiding to speak with Lyra?
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:iconsora765:
sora765 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 23, 2015
that book = terrible clop because of bdsm
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2015
ikr and who would do that to fluttershy\ _ /
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:iconsora765:
sora765 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2015
wait fluttershy is in there i thought it would be just ocs since i never read it but i know about 50 shades of gray(which according t a company that was going to make a pornographic film based on it said in chort that its a twilight saga fanfic which i ain't a fan of that too) so i knew its a ponified version of fifty shades of gray by the title and why twilight like this stuff its as bad as rape clop hoofbeat and banned from equestria is better even though it have shippings i don't like plus its one of the mane 6 that i don't hate if any of them it should be rarity or pinkie pie since rarity is on the top of my worst pony list(due to how feminine she is) and pinkie pie is 3rd because she party too much then between is celestia because of trollstia and molestia
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015
i read it and its more like flutterguy
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:iconsora765:
sora765 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015
is it on fimfiction?
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2015
no i was looking around on the net and saw it just type the name in just be warn it some strong stuff
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:iconsora765:
sora765 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015
oh ok because i know alot of popular clopfics is on fimfiction including dairy of a mad man the 2nd longest clopfic
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:iconthetrefoiler:
TheTrefoiler Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Strangely satisfying!

The conversation doesn't become droll as it increases in length, and Twilight in the foreground/backgound reading that very suspicious book is all kinds of hilarious. :D
Also: Lyra doesn't have to be a third wheel anymore! I'm not a fan of her's or anything, but yay! pinky pie party canon emoticon
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:iconanimatorsnake:
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
Twilight seems to be enjoying that book *wink wink*
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:iconcheerilee-brony:
GwDuncan indeed XD!
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:iconsaddust:
Saddust Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
It's so cool when you forget about a comic on purpose for a few weeks, and when you come back you have many pages to read (^v^)
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:icongmsod:
GMSOD Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Twilight seems to like that book way too much at the end, somethings might happen to Dash now in her sleep
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:iconnecromancerking85:
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
twilight face in panel 13 Who knows what she read I would advise her Necronomicon my favorite books from childhood (I apologize for bad English)

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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
twilight i know that futashy is funny but dont you tell those 2 who know what well happen
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:iconwargofanthropo-cene:
WargofAnthropo-cene Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
Look at Twilight being first disappointed, then irritated at the writing style, then appalled at the content.
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:icondragonjek:
Dragonjek Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I hope Fifty Shades of Hay is better than Fifty Shades of Gray, or Twilight will soon learn what it feels like to burn a book out of unbearable loathing that can't permit something like that to survive.
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:iconstellanora:
StellaNora Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Student
First panel

LOLOMGWTFLEET
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:iconilovemyfavoritegames:
ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
what was Twi reading????
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:iconvengeanceofflames:
VengeanceOfFlames Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, i didn't knew that original book, but i still got the reference ... and after using google, i must laugh realy hard during these panels xD
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:iconlpsstarshine:
LPSStarShine Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
WHAT THE HAY WAS IN THAT BOOK.
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:iconangelman180:
Angelman180 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
OMGLOLWTFLEET!
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:iconwertyla:
Wertyla Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhhhhhhh!!! Twilight in panel 5!!! TOO CUTE. Also, I really love the background in this page. I like nighttime scenes, and the colors are very realistic.
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:iconadmiral-biscuit:
admiral-biscuit Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
Twilight's reaction as she reads--so cute!
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:iconmr101military:
mr101military Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
Fifty shades of grey is what he is referencing.
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:iconbl00d111:
BL00D111 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
wats tat?
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:iconmr101military:
mr101military Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
If you don't know, then don't worry about it, ok?
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:iconbl00d111:
BL00D111 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
okie dokie lokey
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:iconpinkiepie-partypony:
PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight!! Why U Smile At Last Panel? Ohh She's So Into Mares
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:iconserefin99:
Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Twilight used Adorableness!
It's Super Effective!
Creator used Porn Disguise As An Actual Book!
It's Super Effective!(if you know what I mean)
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:iconponyplay15:
Ponyplay15 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOT THE PUPPY DOG EYES!!!!
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:iconpurple-acid1299:
Purple-Acid1299 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
why is twilight always so adorable i can't resist her tho
she's just soooo cute :)
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:iconxcommanderhurricanex:
XCommanderHurricaneX Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
As soon as Twilight said "a book of your choice" I immediately thought of 50 Shades of Grey. xD
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:iconprincessjulliet123:
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
iv read the real fifty shades of grey, its a crap story
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:icon987654321o:
987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student General Artist
what is twilight thinking of?
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:icontrimon20:
Trimon20 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
the only "only" pony Error
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:icondakathi666:
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
TWILIGHT SO KAWAII!
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:iconklystron2010:
klystron2010 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Fifty shades of hay"

:iconhowyoudoinplz: - "Hey look, we got free porn!"
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:iconluciusappaloosius:
LuciusAppaloosius Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Twilight must have reached the part where there's a graphic dressage scene… 7@=Q
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:iconelizabethcool:
Elizabethcool Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student
Wow.:-D
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:iconolivebates:
olivebates Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twitch plays Lyra
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:iconjosephlaville2:
josephlaville2 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Praise the Hemix Fossil.
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:iconjosephlaville2:
josephlaville2 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I mean "Helix".
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
blushes crimson hey um just found this: 50 Shades of Hay I wonder if this is what she's reading lol
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:iconrosepink0011:
rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Artist
erm twi?... i dont think that book is...erm..nvm....well hav fun reading...50 shades of...gre-hay!
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:iconphylos7:
phylos7 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;w;
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What are you reading Twi?
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