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Improving Skills - Part 22 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 22 by BCRich40
Twilight, my only weakness...

What should I say? There are some horrible panels, but there are some surprisingly good panels too. Nothing out of ordinary.

However, This part was quite pain in the ass to draw. After I got it half done, it started to feel that I need really badly a break from comic drawing. Not just a day or two long break like I usually have. More like a week or so. I'll make a short journal entry about it later.

Feel free to point out any visual errors, but it's pretty much waste of time, since I'm already aware of most of the problems.


Big thanks to my pre-reader, :iconmudpony:!

Enjoy!


Part 23

Part 21

Part 1


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:icongmsod:
GMSOD Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Twilight seems to like that book way too much at the end, somethings might happen to Dash now in her sleep
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NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  New Deviant
twilight face in panel 13 Who knows what she read I would advise her Necronomicon my favorite books from childhood (I apologize for bad English)

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inflationdoom Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
twilight i know that futashy is funny but dont you tell those 2 who know what well happen
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:iconwargofanthropo-cene:
WargofAnthropo-cene Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
Look at Twilight being first disappointed, then irritated at the writing style, then appalled at the content.
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Dragonjek Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I hope Fifty Shades of Hay is better than Fifty Shades of Gray, or Twilight will soon learn what it feels like to burn a book out of unbearable loathing that can't permit something like that to survive.
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StellaNora Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Student
First panel

LOLOMGWTFLEET
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ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
what was Twi reading????
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:iconvengeanceofflames:
VengeanceOfFlames Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
Well, i didn't knew that original book, but i still got the reference ... and after using google, i must laugh realy hard during these panels xD
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:iconlpsstarshine:
LPSStarShine Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
WHAT THE HAY WAS IN THAT BOOK.
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:iconangelman180:
Angelman180 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
OMGLOLWTFLEET!
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:iconwertyla:
Wertyla Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Ahhhhhhhh!!! Twilight in panel 5!!! TOO CUTE. Also, I really love the background in this page. I like nighttime scenes, and the colors are very realistic.
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:iconadmiral-biscuit:
admiral-biscuit Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
Twilight's reaction as she reads--so cute!
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:iconmr101military:
mr101military Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
Fifty shades of grey is what he is referencing.
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:iconbl00d111:
BL00D111 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
wats tat?
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:iconmr101military:
mr101military Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
If you don't know, then don't worry about it, ok?
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:iconbl00d111:
BL00D111 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
okie dokie lokey
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:iconpinkiepie-partypony:
PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight!! Why U Smile At Last Panel? Ohh She's So Into Mares
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:iconserefin99:
Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Twilight used Adorableness!
It's Super Effective!
Creator used Porn Disguise As An Actual Book!
It's Super Effective!(if you know what I mean)
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:iconponyplay15:
Ponyplay15 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOT THE PUPPY DOG EYES!!!!
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:iconlasselol1625:
lasselol1625 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
why is twilight always so adorable i can't resist her tho
she's just soooo cute :)
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XCommanderHurricaneX Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
As soon as Twilight said "a book of your choice" I immediately thought of 50 Shades of Grey. xD
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princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
iv read the real fifty shades of grey, its a crap story
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:icon987654321o:
987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student General Artist
what is twilight thinking of?
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:icontrimon20:
Trimon20 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
the only "only" pony Error
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:icondakathi666:
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
TWILIGHT SO KAWAII!
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klystron2010 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Fifty shades of hay"

:iconhowyoudoinplz: - "Hey look, we got free porn!"
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:iconluciusappaloosius:
LuciusAppaloosius Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Twilight must have reached the part where there's a graphic dressage scene… 7@=Q
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:iconelizabethcool:
Elizabethcool Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student
Wow.:-D
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:iconolivebates:
olivebates Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twitch plays Lyra
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:iconjosephlaville2:
josephlaville2 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Praise the Hemix Fossil.
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:iconjosephlaville2:
josephlaville2 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I mean "Helix".
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
blushes crimson hey um just found this: 50 Shades of Hay I wonder if this is what she's reading lol
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:iconrosepink0011:
rosepink0011 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Artist
erm twi?... i dont think that book is...erm..nvm....well hav fun reading...50 shades of...gre-hay!
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phylos7 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;w;
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Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What are you reading Twi?
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Heey Twilight is your weakness too? Yay I found one more
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Scorpion9200 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
sorry. "start learning it soon as possible" into "start learning it AS soon as possible"
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:iconphylos7:
phylos7 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

grammar what do? Has much try effort for which of the :'D

Yus :'3

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Scorpion9200 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013

hey you have been doing a great job but there is one tiny mistake in block 8. lyra says "you should learn it soon as possible." when it should be "you should learn it AS soon as possible. Its just a tiny mistake though. you are still doing a great job

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Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Love Twi's expression.  I think you're having lots of fun with this.
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:iconkacript:
kacript Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Don't worry Lyra, we forgive you.
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Snowrav3n Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
He he... Just as Isseus wrote before me, I had no idea where you could be from "Mr. creator" but when "saatana"  and "tjenare" came up in Lyras rambling I began to strongly suspect that you're from a Finnish/Swedish part of Finland. Is that right? =)  Also: Awesome comic! It's adorable. =)
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BCRich40 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nope, I'm from Eastern Finland! Almost no one speaks Swedish here. I just remember a few words, that's all.

Also: Thank you!
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Poditom199 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Yaaaaay! :DDDDDD More Finnish People! :D
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Snowrav3n Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Oh I see! My dad's from Veteli, close to Kaustinen and I've also got relatives in Kuusamo, but I guess that's more north-eastern Finland.  Sadly though I've never learnt the language. =/
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Isseus Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
And you're Finnish. I had no idea before you wrote dem curses. So, uhh, Finnhoof? I don't think I've seen you in any of the meetups but hey, at least there's one more awesome brony on the internet. <3
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BCRich40 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finnhoof!
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Darksunrise957 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As soon as i heard "50 shades of Hay", I knew I had to watch her facial expressions in the rest of the panels. Did not disappoint. Awesome comic so far; I hope you keep it up!
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Articunos-Bitch Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
I've read the series up til now in one sitting. Articuno approves.
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