Yay, Title fulfillment
funny thing is "face-hoofing" was actually rather common in the show.
The fourth wall breaking thing is usually well overdone, but you manage to keep it fresh.
I lol'd at your tail is out of the box. this series just screams fourth wall breakage lmao
Gotta love Twilight with her positive outlook on anything.
Your English looks fine to me. I don't notice any errors with it.
Can't wait for the next part.
this is quite funny
pretty good so far
Panel 2: Dash: "Seriously Twilight, if my hooves were longer, I would facehoof now..." Panel 4: Dash: "Well this is more like it! But I think my hooves are still a bit too short."
Your tail is out of the box
well done here