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Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40
I got a lot to say about this part. I don't even know where to began.

I'm a bit disappointed. I waited so long this part, but it turned out worse than I wanted. Some of the panels look fine, and some of them look horrible! I had serious problems with Dash's expressions. I just didn't get them right, until it was too late. I have too much to say!

At least I learned something. A lot actually, and that's the point of the whole series! I know what I'm doing wrong, and I know how to make things better. There's a few things that I don't get yet, but I just need more time to learn... So you don't need to point out visually "wrong" things. I'm aware of them already.

There's always something you could point out though...

There's probably a tons of grammar mistakes, so please point them out. I'll fix them soon as possible. I ask you to send corrections in note form for me, so there won't be a huge wall of text in comment section. You can point out small things like typos in comments though. And please, remember to tell me why the sentences are wrong. It helps me to improve my English skills.

Enjoy!


PART 18

PART 16

PART 1

My Little Pony Hasbro
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Dev-i Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Hobbyist Photographer
The way you draw wet-maned Dash is simply the best! 
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member
Don't worry Twilight, soon you're going to have a similar problem of your body betraying you.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member
Some of us are at some time. Like some of you!
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aldodger Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
your drawing has improved greatly since part 1 :) bravo (clapping)
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sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
xD    closet pony
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987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
dat face
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2007excalibur2007 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
The last panel speaks to me on a spiritual level.
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Undercover-Brony Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
<Insert comforting/reassuring message here> I'm not really good with words.
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dehyan Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Women get 10x more attractive with their hair down. Bonus points if it's wet. It never fails and I don't know why women just wear their hair down all the time.
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LightningBoltSuprise Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Artist

Dat flank in panel 7 is...


SEEEEEEEEEENNSAAATIONAL. OW

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