I got a lot to say about this part. I don't even know where to began.
I'm a bit disappointed. I waited so long this part, but it turned out worse than I wanted. Some of the panels look fine, and some of them look horrible! I had serious problems with Dash's expressions. I just didn't get them right, until it was too late. I have too much to say!
At least I learned something. A lot actually, and that's the point of the whole series! I know what I'm doing wrong, and I know how to make things better. There's a few things that I don't get yet, but I just need more time to learn... So you don't need to point out visually "wrong" things. I'm aware of them already.
There's always something you could point out though...
There's probably a tons of grammar mistakes, so please point them out. I'll fix them soon as possible. I ask you to send corrections in note form for me, so there won't be a huge wall of text in comment section. You can point out small things like typos in comments though. And please, remember to tell me why the sentences are wrong. It helps me to improve my English skills.
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