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Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40
I got a lot to say about this part. I don't even know where to began.

I'm a bit disappointed. I waited so long this part, but it turned out worse than I wanted. Some of the panels look fine, and some of them look horrible! I had serious problems with Dash's expressions. I just didn't get them right, until it was too late. I have too much to say!

At least I learned something. A lot actually, and that's the point of the whole series! I know what I'm doing wrong, and I know how to make things better. There's a few things that I don't get yet, but I just need more time to learn... So you don't need to point out visually "wrong" things. I'm aware of them already.

There's always something you could point out though...

There's probably a tons of grammar mistakes, so please point them out. I'll fix them soon as possible. I ask you to send corrections in note form for me, so there won't be a huge wall of text in comment section. You can point out small things like typos in comments though. And please, remember to tell me why the sentences are wrong. It helps me to improve my English skills.

Enjoy!


PART 18

PART 16

PART 1

My Little Pony Hasbro
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pinkadiapia Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
So cutteeee
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PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Your Skills Are Actually Improving!
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firecharge44371 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
read the name to the shampoo. LOL
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Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Twilight, be thankful that your sexual orientation is the ONLY thing you're confused about. Too much cider, and it could've ended even worse.
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Dev-i Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The way you draw wet-maned Dash is simply the best! 
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Don't worry Twilight, soon you're going to have a similar problem of your body betraying you.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Some of us are at some time. Like some of you!
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aldodger Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
your drawing has improved greatly since part 1 :) bravo (clapping)
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sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
xD    closet pony
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987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
dat face
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