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Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 17 by BCRich40
I got a lot to say about this part. I don't even know where to began.

I'm a bit disappointed. I waited so long this part, but it turned out worse than I wanted. Some of the panels look fine, and some of them look horrible! I had serious problems with Dash's expressions. I just didn't get them right, until it was too late. I have too much to say!

At least I learned something. A lot actually, and that's the point of the whole series! I know what I'm doing wrong, and I know how to make things better. There's a few things that I don't get yet, but I just need more time to learn... So you don't need to point out visually "wrong" things. I'm aware of them already.

There's always something you could point out though...

There's probably a tons of grammar mistakes, so please point them out. I'll fix them soon as possible. I ask you to send corrections in note form for me, so there won't be a huge wall of text in comment section. You can point out small things like typos in comments though. And please, remember to tell me why the sentences are wrong. It helps me to improve my English skills.

Enjoy!


PART 18

PART 16

PART 1

My Little Pony © Hasbro
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Welcome to the life as a Bisexual Twilight :D
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:iconnecromancerking85:
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  New Deviant
comic is really weird just missing undead mutant cyborgs that eat the brain through the eye socket :)
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:iconinflationdoom:
inflationdoom Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
0//////////////0 sooooooooo cute
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:iconpinkadiapia:
pinkadiapia Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
So cutteeee
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:iconpinkiepie-partypony:
PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your Skills Are Actually Improving!
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:iconfirecharge44371:
firecharge44371 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
read the name to the shampoo. LOL
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:iconserefin99:
Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Twilight, be thankful that your sexual orientation is the ONLY thing you're confused about. Too much cider, and it could've ended even worse.
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:icondev-i:
Dev-i Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The way you draw wet-maned Dash is simply the best! 
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Don't worry Twilight, soon you're going to have a similar problem of your body betraying you.
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Some of us are at some time. Like some of you!
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:iconaldodger:
aldodger Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
your drawing has improved greatly since part 1 :) bravo (clapping)
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:iconsushero:
sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
xD    closet pony
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:icon987654321o:
987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
dat face
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:icon2007excalibur2007:
2007excalibur2007 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
The last panel speaks to me on a spiritual level.
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:iconundercover-brony:
Undercover-Brony Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
<Insert comforting/reassuring message here> I'm not really good with words.
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:iconscotchnvl:
ScotchNvl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Women get 10x more attractive with their hair down. Bonus points if it's wet. It never fails and I don't know why women just wear their hair down all the time.
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:iconlightningboltsuprise:
LightningBoltSuprise Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Student Artist

Dat flank in panel 7 is...


SEEEEEEEEEENNSAAATIONAL. OW

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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Aren't we all Twilight.
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Noope
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
I like the fact that Dash takes 3 panels for her wing-boner to settle down lol
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes
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:icon0xxinsanityxx0:
0xXInsanityXx0 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
SO AWESOME! (Lyra is crazy LOL)
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:iconxormak:
xormak Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the ponies: dayum good style, like it =)
background: awesome water, only the shore is a bit to straight^^
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
So I take it Lyra already washed up and she's drying off?
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Rule 34 is strong with this one
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:iconshikimaakemi:
ShikimaAkemi Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student General Artist
XDDD I love the *pomf* thingy, it's just so cool :XD:
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:iconn0tsaved:
n0tsaved Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I planned on doing this all in one go, but I'll stop here and say that this part is probably one of my favorites because you decided to try reflective surfaces with the water. It came out quite nicely in my opinion :3
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
man this is so good drawn
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
The story & relationships are awesome-episode worthy even!
This is from a guy who's not into shipping much!
How much more is left-I hope lots!
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Your English is really pretty good

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:iconthunderingalicorn:
ThunderingAlicorn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Listen to me. YOUR COMIC IS JUST FINE! You are a HECK a lot better than a LOT of novice artists out there. Keep this up, you're doing great!
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:icongindranis:
Gindranis Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
POMF!
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Take note, Twilight. One day, probably soon, you will be glad you already know that the Dash especially likes you with a wet mane.
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:iconrockethead117:
Rockethead117 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aren't we all...
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:iconmartymurray:
MartyMurray Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How are you confused, Twilight? You are literally a walking bisexual flag.   
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn I was hoping she'd be asexual. 
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
And Rainbow Dash is a walking gay pride flag... That´s why Dash an Twilight make a so good match xD
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:iconmartymurray:
MartyMurray Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And Pinkie is a pansexual flag.
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
OMG xDDDD

Well, Pinkie loves everybody xD
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:iconmartymurray:
MartyMurray Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My point exactly! 
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Or everypony
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
OMG that's true!
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Huh. She really is.

You learn something every day. Thank you, internet person!
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:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha, that last panel :D
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:iconmithandir730:
Mithandir730 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight... y u so cute?!
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:iconapluu:
Apluu Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wingboner XD
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:iconmaskenemy:
maskenemy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
nice shampoo name (mane & tail)
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
considering its a reference to "Blades of Glory"
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:icondaisysong907:
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
well I guess Twilight is a bi
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:iconshardstar3:
shardstar3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*punches you and you go flying* KO
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