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Improving Skills - Part 16 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 16 by BCRich40
Finally! It took over a month, but was totally worth it! I even managed to fit every panel in one file. My computer almost died, because the original image is about 45000 pixels high, but it's much easier to work with one file than two.

To the point then! This is a really special part. It's all about experimenting new things. There's lots of camera angles I've never tried before. I tried many new things with backgrounds, and the most important thing with this part, is a new drawing technique!

I started to draw this with my basic technique, but I noticed that I need to improve it to get all new camera angles right. You shoud be able to see the point where I started to use the new technique. This is the reason why some characters look a bit... strange. I took it's time to get used to that technique, but it's totally worth it. Characters should look more normal in part 17.

Of course there is some flaws, like all camera angles don't look right, there's some stupid things wrong with backgrounds, and some of the panels look ridiculous etc, but hey! This comic is all about learning, and I learned so much while I was drawing this! It makes me happy!


And one more thing. You probably guess what it is.

I ask you to point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic. English is not my first language, so there is always something to fix. I'll fix those errors and that helps me to improve my English skills, and it makes the comic series more comfortable to read. If you'll point out an error, please tell me what is exactly wrong with it. It doesn't help me, if you'll say:

This sentence should be written like this
*correction*


I want to know why it should be written like that. I hope you understand what I mean. Of course there is exceptions like missing letters or something like that.

If there's a lot to correct, please send them in note form. Let's just spare the comment section from huge walls of correction messages. Thank you.

Anyway, enjoy!


PART 17

PART 15

PART 1


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:iconvengeanceofflames:
VengeanceOfFlames Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
This is so hilarous!
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:iconmylittleponyrocksand:
The last few pages haven't let me zoom in by tapping the comic.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
What book would it have been if she had won?
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:iconprincessjulliet123:
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Am I the only one who saw trollface in there?
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FreedomAndChaos Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
It's amazing to see how far you've come. It's a gradual process, but this strip was where  it suddenly hit me and it really stands out.

The new angles, the shadows, the level of detail, it's phenomenal and the ultimate testament to practice making perfect.
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Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Poor Twi
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:iconplasmanomega:
plasmanomega Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
DO A BARREL ROLL!! (Press Z or R Twice) xD
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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
The front on noses look a little odd...
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:iconsaritasmith2013:
saritasmith2013 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
AWW thats just torture...
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:iconjohndudeiv:
JohnDudeIV Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013   Photographer
In the future can you place stop using the word "buck" and its derivatives as some sort of fuck lite? The word already has a meaning which the show uses correctly. Misusing it only makes you look stupid.
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Winree Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And criticizing the authors use of it is making you look stupid, to some people at least. Think of 'buck' as a replacement for fuck, such as 'fudge' does way back home. This is a fairly kid-friendly comic, and if you want the little foalies to start swearing, then start your own story.

This is a hugely popular comic, and I highly doubt that the creator will stop using the word 'buck' because you asked him, however kindly, not to.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
leave him be he's only using terms from the show.
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:iconjohndudeiv:
JohnDudeIV Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014   Photographer
Yes, using it incorrectly. Not ONCE in the show was the word buck used like that.
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
who remotely even cares? buzz off! if bronies want to use the term then they 'bucking' can! your the only dipstick making a fuss over this crap.
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0xXInsanityXx0 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
LOL
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:iconghalaghor:
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
hey twilight, there is nothing wrong with being a little bit bi if you know what i mean...
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
That's rough. She didn't even have a bucket this time. :/
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Them memes
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:iconmrspartin:
MrSpartin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ROLL ROLL ROLL!!!
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BARF BARF BARF!!!
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:iconbigkatana:
BigKatana Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
lol those references :D (Big Grin)
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:iconkmacmcglikesart:
Kmacmcglikesart Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its 94.6 not 94,6!
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xormak Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you know, using a dot is maybe the american version but for example in germany, you are using the dots to devide the digits after every third one and a comma to seperate the decimal places from the rest^^
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BCRich40 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Here it's 94,6.
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:iconkmacmcglikesart:
Kmacmcglikesart Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
like height ft,in?
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
pretty much. I've seen variations of 1.000.000 and 1,000,000 as well so its not uncommon to use commas instead of full stops.
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
This comic is becoming notably awesome
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Siarnaq21 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not a barrel roll, it's an aileron roll.  Except she doesn't have ailerons.  So it's just a roll.
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shieldgenerator7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
"Of course there is some flaws"
The correct form of "to be" in this case is "are" so it matches "flaws" ("flaws" is plural, so should be "to be", which is "are")
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Gnorian Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I'm hoping rather than a typical shipping comic, this is about the creator trying to ship them--then they thwart the attempt. Maybe I should have just abandoned this comic when Dash said she was a snake, though.
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really hope you're right.
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
No, Twi, you were into stallions. Then you learned that you had a chance with the Dash. Now you are Dashosexual. You are attracted only to the Dash.
Well, that and books.
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DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
gross well at least Twilight beat the challenge LIKE A BOSS
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:iconalexkazhdan:
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She didn't. The objective was to do a barrel roll without vomiting.
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elrunion136 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconchallengeacceptedplz:
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:iconlightning--blast:
lightning--blast Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
Whoops, there's a comma in the percentage there instead of a period!

Other than that, excellent job!
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:iconbcrich40:
BCRich40 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's normal to use comma with percentages here.
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lightning--blast Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
Ah, didn't know that, thanks. :)
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AuthorNumber2 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013   Digital Artist
That's two! Two times the pony has puked! *insert vampire laugh here, with lightning and thunder in the backgrod*
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MightyMewtron Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconprincesslunaplz: The puke has been doubled!
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dos1 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Starting from this part you do strange things to their noses... Why? :o
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:iconbcrich40:
BCRich40 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
At this point, I realised that I don't want to use exactly the same style like the show does, so I started to develop my own style. Even though this part looks quite silly today, it's still a really important part to me, because it changed everything.
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crazyseandx Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Panels 9, 10, and others I may have missed: WHAT DID YOU DO TO TWILIGHT'S MUZZLE/SNOUT/WHATEVER YOU CALL IT?!?!?
:nuu: :onfire: :ohmygod:
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AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
oh forgot to put yay for Twidash shipping
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:iconangelskarith:
AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
awww poor twilight
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epicrainbowdashfan Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Nice StarFox reference there
Poor Twi, no new book
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:iconrodrigo90:
Rodrigo90 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Woow You have improved a lot and I mean A LOT compared with the first part !! Congratulations !! It's an awsome comic !!
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:icontruecere:
truecere Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
yo bro should said this ealer but dash no lesbo
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"Myabe the creator can affect our minds!" Well based on the fact that RD lez, and so is twilight, im thinking its true xD >.>
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:iconsporex2-paints:
sporex2-paints Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
No,I'm sure all poneys are bi.
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
according to creepy bronies. THEY AREN'T LEZ PPL JUST MAKE THAT UP! i totally want them to make an episode where rd goes on a date with some guy pony and then i can be like TAKE THAT
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