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Improving Skills - Part 16 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 16 by BCRich40
Finally! It took over a month, but was totally worth it! I even managed to fit every panel in one file. My computer almost died, because the original image is about 45000 pixels high, but it's much easier to work with one file than two.

To the point then! This is a really special part. It's all about experimenting new things. There's lots of camera angles I've never tried before. I tried many new things with backgrounds, and the most important thing with this part, is a new drawing technique!

I started to draw this with my basic technique, but I noticed that I need to improve it to get all new camera angles right. You shoud be able to see the point where I started to use the new technique. This is the reason why some characters look a bit... strange. I took it's time to get used to that technique, but it's totally worth it. Characters should look more normal in part 17.

Of course there is some flaws, like all camera angles don't look right, there's some stupid things wrong with backgrounds, and some of the panels look ridiculous etc, but hey! This comic is all about learning, and I learned so much while I was drawing this! It makes me happy!


And one more thing. You probably guess what it is.

I ask you to point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic. English is not my first language, so there is always something to fix. I'll fix those errors and that helps me to improve my English skills, and it makes the comic series more comfortable to read. If you'll point out an error, please tell me what is exactly wrong with it. It doesn't help me, if you'll say:

This sentence should be written like this
*correction*


I want to know why it should be written like that. I hope you understand what I mean. Of course there is exceptions like missing letters or something like that.

If there's a lot to correct, please send them in note form. Let's just spare the comment section from huge walls of correction messages. Thank you.

Anyway, enjoy!


PART 17

PART 15

PART 1


My Little Pony © Hasbro
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:iconmylittleponyrocksand:
The last few pages haven't let me zoom in by tapping the comic.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
What book would it have been if she had won?
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princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Am I the only one who saw trollface in there?
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FreedomAndChaos Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
It's amazing to see how far you've come. It's a gradual process, but this strip was where  it suddenly hit me and it really stands out.

The new angles, the shadows, the level of detail, it's phenomenal and the ultimate testament to practice making perfect.
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Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Poor Twi
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plasmanomega Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
DO A BARREL ROLL!! (Press Z or R Twice) xD
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ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
The front on noses look a little odd...
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saritasmith2013 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
AWW thats just torture...
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JohnDudeIV Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013   Photographer
In the future can you place stop using the word "buck" and its derivatives as some sort of fuck lite? The word already has a meaning which the show uses correctly. Misusing it only makes you look stupid.
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Winree Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And criticizing the authors use of it is making you look stupid, to some people at least. Think of 'buck' as a replacement for fuck, such as 'fudge' does way back home. This is a fairly kid-friendly comic, and if you want the little foalies to start swearing, then start your own story.

This is a hugely popular comic, and I highly doubt that the creator will stop using the word 'buck' because you asked him, however kindly, not to.
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