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Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40
And it's finally here!

I have really mixed feelings about this comic. It feels like I have taken a step backwards, but in the other hand, I can see the improvement in so many levels. So if you can't see any improvement in this comic, I swear it's still there! It's just not visual.

The last panel was pain in the ass. I basically had to create Twilight out of nothing, because the sketch sucked so much. There's some annoying minor flaws, but nothing too serious.

I have nothing else to say about this part. There's nothing special, but it's needed to carry the plot forward. Next part won't be a long one either, but I'll write a journal entry about that during next few days. I believe there will be some major changes.


And if you would be so kind, could you point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic? That would help to improve my English skills, and it would make reading more comfortable. Thanks!

Enjoy!


PART 16

PART 14

PART 1


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:iconrainbowdash10124:
rainbowdash10124 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Student Artist
Z
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Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
yes indeed
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Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
yep, Twilight is cute when she is sleeping. actually, i think most ponies r cute when they sleep. except for my OC, since, well, noopny has ever seen him asleep, and only a hoof full have seen him at all.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015
What does he looks like when he's asleep?
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:iconkartoffelkamm:
Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
he usually turns invisible or uses an illusion spell to look like a pillow, but sometimes he just looks like a sleeping pony.
also, whatever u do: never ask him to tell a ghost story.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015
Never? Why? Does he have some PTSD-like problems with ghosts?
I presume more can be read about him in your gallery, right?
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:iconkartoffelkamm:
Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
nope, there is nothing about him in my gallery. also, he doesnt have problems with ghosts, but he sort of causes problems with ghosts. u see, his special talent is casting illusion spells, which he can do pretty well, and he sometimes works as spy, or makes a house appear haunted so it can be bought by the guy who told him to make it appear haunted. but when he tells a ghost story, they end up similar to Beyond Belief: Fact or Fiction. u cant tell if they are true, and he doesnt like to reveal this information.
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LittleJackiePapercut Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
There's a very good reason why they would look at the sky when addressing someone they can't see: They assume that person is not underground.
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the-mysterious-ponyX Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
please let this comic go on forever "squee"Heart Heart Heart 
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GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Now that I think about it, have we ever seen how Twilight is when she is sleeping in the series?(I mean, does she move around a lot,  kick her sheet of in her sleep, or wrap herself around it like a tortilla?)
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marinus18 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015
I am glad now I don't drink alcohol.
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:iconstarsword:
Starsword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014   Writer
I love how Twilight sleeps in this strip, it's both halarious and adorable.:D (Big Grin) 
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ZonikRainbooM Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Panel 3: bucket appears* Panel 4: *twilight pukes* Panel 5 & 6: * twilight dripping with it.../ bucket disappears* So... the creator has the bucket emptied after that, right...? ^^ LoL

Gorgeous story and improved art in the meantime, truly a joy to read this kinda stuff. Best comic i've seen so far. Unexpected turns and lots of funny moments. Love it /)
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Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Poor thing, I just wanna hug her! (After her nap of course.)
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
And she takes her bath, and teeth. Right?
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:icondakathi666:
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Ooh yeah, That too.
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Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes she is Dash :3
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Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Yes.  Yes she is.
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:iconcoaa:
coaa Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Reminds me of Garfield sleeping
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:icondevster14:
devster14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Mister creator is so nice giving Twilight that bucket. :)
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
I was thinking on that and it leads me to believe that he can read minds lol.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was eating when I witnessed twilight throwing up.
Hey creator, can I have a bucket?
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:iconatylo:
atylo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
Really awesome comics. But does it have the end??
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AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Those are very strange mountains. :)
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Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I'm really liking this story.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why did twilight think it was a good idea to get drunk in the first place?
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
it was only to show Dashie what happened when she was under a cider influence
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not the best way to show her.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
maybe but its not really that far out of character, there have been moments where she's acted silly in the show.
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There's acting out/insanity, but in the US (or a lot of not-entirely liberal countries), its quite different to be drunk. Let's put it like this: ethanol (the thing that makes potato juice whiskey) is the oldest psychoactive drug known to man. 
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
yeah of course, however you have to remember that this comic could need to cater for more than one culture without being offensive.
so using the term cider not only relates to both worlds (equestria and earth) but it also helps to clear up that he is starting to reveal that
the current characters are indeed in a world that their not familiar with.
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MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it's cider, but it IS alcohol. And that alcohol has caused arousal in Rainbow Dash, making the worst character start hitting on the third best character and earning a spot on the short bus.
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RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
you don't even sound like a brony.. because the first thing the fandom and the show teaches is to avoid being judgmental and critical of other people/ponies, also who cares if its an alcohol there's been no harm from them drinking it so just leave the fact alone also like I said in another comment,
the combination of "wing-Boners" and Blushing is completely fan-made so there's no evidence to support any of it leading to erotic arousal. yes there is blushing in the show but the two are rarely ever combined.
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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warlord487 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Already the art style has boosted dramatically (far past my art skill). I also love your background gags.
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Twilight lololol
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zZenosyne Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE how Twi is laying down in that last panel! You, good sir, are AWESOME!
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:icontechnosis:
technosis Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I'll do you one better Rainbow, Panel 9 Twi is just as adorable as Sleeping Twi is.
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Sleep, and dream of the Dash . . . or maybe just of not being hung over.

Or maybe dream of a time when I'm not kind of weirding myself out with my usage of definite articles. All these statements about "the Dash" just feel slimy against my fingers as I type. But I can't stop.
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happipet Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ouch.Sleeping like that must hurt,I tried that before and got a really sore neck.
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XxmermagicxX Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i had to sleep like that for about a week cuz i was sick and sleeping any other way made my insides hert and after that my neck felt awful
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shardstar3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
3 4 and 5 is halerious because twi didnt even ask for the bucket and he gave one to her anyway because of hangovers
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DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
lol
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greencarrot01 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, Twilight, but all of you in there was CUTE!

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fatalerror328 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Dash... ... *facehoof*
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AuthorNumber2 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Puking has never been so adorable!
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AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
daww cute
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Just-This-Guy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
I never thought seeing a pony puke would be adorable but....
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Mrcurrentlyunknown Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Anyone else thing hung over and sick Twilight is super cute :D
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