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Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40
And it's finally here!

I have really mixed feelings about this comic. It feels like I have taken a step backwards, but in the other hand, I can see the improvement in so many levels. So if you can't see any improvement in this comic, I swear it's still there! It's just not visual.

The last panel was pain in the ass. I basically had to create Twilight out of nothing, because the sketch sucked so much. There's some annoying minor flaws, but nothing too serious.

I have nothing else to say about this part. There's nothing special, but it's needed to carry the plot forward. Next part won't be a long one either, but I'll write a journal entry about that during next few days. I believe there will be some major changes.


And if you would be so kind, could you point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic? That would help to improve my English skills, and it would make reading more comfortable. Thanks!

Enjoy!


PART 16

PART 14

PART 1


My Little Pony Hasbro
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Starsword Featured By Owner 5 days ago   Writer
I love how Twilight sleeps in this strip, it's both halarious and adorable.:D (Big Grin) 
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ZonikRainbooM Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  New member
Panel 3: bucket appears* Panel 4: *twilight pukes* Panel 5 & 6: * twilight dripping with it.../ bucket disappears* So... the creator has the bucket emptied after that, right...? ^^ LoL

Gorgeous story and improved art in the meantime, truly a joy to read this kinda stuff. Best comic i've seen so far. Unexpected turns and lots of funny moments. Love it /)
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Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Poor thing, I just wanna hug her! (After her nap of course.)
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member
And she takes her bath, and teeth. Right?
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Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Ooh yeah, That too.
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  New member
:)
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Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes she is Dash :3
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Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Yes.  Yes she is.
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coaa Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Reminds me of Garfield sleeping
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devster14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Mister creator is so nice giving Twilight that bucket. :)
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