And it's finally here!
I have really mixed feelings about this comic. It feels like I have taken a step backwards, but in the other hand, I can see the improvement in so many levels. So if you can't see any improvement in this comic, I swear it's still there! It's just not visual.
The last panel was pain in the ass. I basically had to create Twilight out of nothing, because the sketch sucked so much. There's some annoying minor flaws, but nothing too serious.
I have nothing else to say about this part. There's nothing special, but it's needed to carry the plot forward. Next part won't be a long one either, but I'll write a journal entry about that during next few days. I believe there will be some major changes.
And if you would be so kind, could you point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic? That would help to improve my English skills, and it would make reading more comfortable. Thanks!
Enjoy!PART 16PART 14PART 1
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