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Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 15 by BCRich40
And it's finally here!

I have really mixed feelings about this comic. It feels like I have taken a step backwards, but in the other hand, I can see the improvement in so many levels. So if you can't see any improvement in this comic, I swear it's still there! It's just not visual.

The last panel was pain in the ass. I basically had to create Twilight out of nothing, because the sketch sucked so much. There's some annoying minor flaws, but nothing too serious.

I have nothing else to say about this part. There's nothing special, but it's needed to carry the plot forward. Next part won't be a long one either, but I'll write a journal entry about that during next few days. I believe there will be some major changes.

And if you would be so kind, could you point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic? That would help to improve my English skills, and it would make reading more comfortable. Thanks!





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GwDuncan Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Now that I think about it, have we ever seen how Twilight is when she is sleeping in the series?(I mean, does she move around a lot,  kick her sheet of in her sleep, or wrap herself around it like a tortilla?)
marinus18 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015
I am glad now I don't drink alcohol.
Starsword Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014   Writer
I love how Twilight sleeps in this strip, it's both halarious and adorable.:D (Big Grin) 
ZonikRainbooM Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Panel 3: bucket appears* Panel 4: *twilight pukes* Panel 5 & 6: * twilight dripping with it.../ bucket disappears* So... the creator has the bucket emptied after that, right...? ^^ LoL

Gorgeous story and improved art in the meantime, truly a joy to read this kinda stuff. Best comic i've seen so far. Unexpected turns and lots of funny moments. Love it /)
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Poor thing, I just wanna hug her! (After her nap of course.)
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
And she takes her bath, and teeth. Right?
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Ooh yeah, That too.
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes she is Dash :3
Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Yes.  Yes she is.
coaa Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Reminds me of Garfield sleeping
devster14 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Mister creator is so nice giving Twilight that bucket. :)
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
I was thinking on that and it leads me to believe that he can read minds lol.
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was eating when I witnessed twilight throwing up.
Hey creator, can I have a bucket?
atylo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
Really awesome comics. But does it have the end??
AlexKazhdan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Those are very strange mountains. :)
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I'm really liking this story.
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why did twilight think it was a good idea to get drunk in the first place?
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
it was only to show Dashie what happened when she was under a cider influence
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not the best way to show her.
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
maybe but its not really that far out of character, there have been moments where she's acted silly in the show.
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
There's acting out/insanity, but in the US (or a lot of not-entirely liberal countries), its quite different to be drunk. Let's put it like this: ethanol (the thing that makes potato juice whiskey) is the oldest psychoactive drug known to man. 
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
yeah of course, however you have to remember that this comic could need to cater for more than one culture without being offensive.
so using the term cider not only relates to both worlds (equestria and earth) but it also helps to clear up that he is starting to reveal that
the current characters are indeed in a world that their not familiar with.
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it's cider, but it IS alcohol. And that alcohol has caused arousal in Rainbow Dash, making the worst character start hitting on the third best character and earning a spot on the short bus.
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
you don't even sound like a brony.. because the first thing the fandom and the show teaches is to avoid being judgmental and critical of other people/ponies, also who cares if its an alcohol there's been no harm from them drinking it so just leave the fact alone also like I said in another comment,
the combination of "wing-Boners" and Blushing is completely fan-made so there's no evidence to support any of it leading to erotic arousal. yes there is blushing in the show but the two are rarely ever combined.
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
warlord487 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Already the art style has boosted dramatically (far past my art skill). I also love your background gags.
WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Twilight lololol
ThunderingAlicorn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE how Twi is laying down in that last panel! You, good sir, are AWESOME!
technosis Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I'll do you one better Rainbow, Panel 9 Twi is just as adorable as Sleeping Twi is.
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Sleep, and dream of the Dash . . . or maybe just of not being hung over.

Or maybe dream of a time when I'm not kind of weirding myself out with my usage of definite articles. All these statements about "the Dash" just feel slimy against my fingers as I type. But I can't stop.
happipet Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ouch.Sleeping like that must hurt,I tried that before and got a really sore neck.
XxmermagicxX Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i had to sleep like that for about a week cuz i was sick and sleeping any other way made my insides hert and after that my neck felt awful
shardstar3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
3 4 and 5 is halerious because twi didnt even ask for the bucket and he gave one to her anyway because of hangovers
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
greencarrot01 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, Twilight, but all of you in there was CUTE!

fatalerror328 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Dash... ... *facehoof*
AuthorNumber2 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Puking has never been so adorable!
AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
daww cute
Just-This-Guy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
I never thought seeing a pony puke would be adorable but....
Mrcurrentlyunknown Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Anyone else thing hung over and sick Twilight is super cute :D
Paxiya Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
And the last panel is amazing Dawwww
Hors1988 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
it remainsme of my firt time drunk...... it really suck hahahaha
umbreon-boogiebambam Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol i love twis sleepin pose
SorinMysticRush Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dashie, dashie, dashie...
DimmaDan Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
Y'know, I wish I could *poof* away a bucket of vomit. Instead of actually having to deal with it.

By the way, your doing great on improving both the art of the comics and your English. Keep up the hard work and you'll be fine.
SolidSanchez Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
This comic is wonderful! Can't wait to see the next part.

P.S. Oh, Twilight... You're adorable, even with your head in the bucket...
Yooyfull Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
These series are amazing and you have improved soooo much!
The absolute best thing in my oppinion is dashies folded wings, they look so powerfull and majestical!
11thinv Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
lyra's speech bubble panel 1

all right is generally spelled with

two words
IDK-youTellMe Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Um... not to jump into conclusions... but the most times I saw "alright" it was as one word.
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