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Improving Skills - Part 14 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 14 by BCRich40
That's it! No more sad Twilight! It just feeld bad...

I have so much to tell... Where should I start...

First of all, this is actually the longest part so far. Surprisingly, it took only two weeks to finish this. Part 11 took a month, and it's shorter. Well it's just a one panel, but still...

I think that quality of this part is varies too much. My explanation is that art block -thingy (or whaterver you call it). I did draw some of the sketches during that condition. It wasn't a good idea, but it could look worse!

I had two ideas, how this part would end, but then I realized, how one simple thing could change the whole comic. I decided to use my original plan, but I wanted to execute my another one. And that's exactly what I'm going to do. I'll upload a new drawing next week.

I have so much to say, but I'm so tired at the moment. I finished five of the panels during this day. I have never done that before, and I'll never do it again. So exhausting...

By the way, someone actually quessed, what is going to happen in this part. That was just hilarious. It was pretty obvious what was going to happen though.

And please!

Point out any grammar mistakes you can find from the comic. English is not my main language, so there's just about always something to correct. It's important, because I want to improve my English skills as much as I want to improve my drawing skills. And besides, it's much more comfortable to read when there's no grammar mistakes.

Enjoy!


PART 15

PART 13

PART 1


My Little Pony © Hasbro
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:iconyoshidash:
YoshiDash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
I laughed my cutiemark off! xD
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
If Lyra wasn't there, probably would've gone completely differently.
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:iconsecretkeeperthekill:
secretkeeperthekill Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
killed the moment xD
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:iconsushero:
sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
jjajajjaa   faith in ponies
restored 
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:iconthe-rainbron3:
the-rainbron3 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i look up Panadol... Wikipedia is USELESS 
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:iconchrismaticfool:
chrismaticfool Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
This comic is brought to you by Panadol. Seriously, this could be an ad for Panadol XD
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:iconfralleman:
FralLeman Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Damn non-Hasbro advertisements gettin' into ma ponies!
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:iconanlenararity:
AnlenaRarity Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
HA ! LESBIANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN !!! :iconraritycheckplz:
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:iconclubbylia111:
clubbylia111 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
Thanks god its not what i thought that happened.
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
stares at Dash's Wing his head tilted is it supposed to be that large or is it just me?
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks nothing happened last night :3
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:icondawnstarwhooves:
DawnStarWhooves Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well my 2nd OC can stop throwing knifes at pics of Rainbow Dash. :) :D
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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
*snort* XD I'd love to hear the rest of that night.
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:iconkacript:
kacript Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Yeah, Lyra wasn't the only one thinking those dirty things.
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:icon0xxinsanityxx0:
0xXInsanityXx0 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
LOL
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Dr. X: Likely story, Rainbow Anne Dash! Your head will be on a stake outside the Golden Oak Library for making others think twice before attempting such atrocities! Cocks up his Death Ray
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:iconhgfggg:
hgfggg Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Oh yeah, the death ray, made by Dr. Death! It's for pricing! Thanks, I needed that back.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Dr. X: ....... Who is Dr. Death?
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:iconhgfggg:
hgfggg Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
You never saw that skit? SERIOUSLY?
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Dr. X: I never heard of him.
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Viola: Put the gun away before my Psychic hits something REALLY sensitive.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Dr. X: Fires at you and turns you into disorganized atoms in the air, disintegrating you I despise those with foolish threats......
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
*Viola uses Protect*
Viola: Wow, that was close. You okay, Jocke?
Me: Just dandy, m'dear.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Dr. X: And as they are merely atoms in the empty space, they hallucinate with the sense of security, until suddenly, their worst nightmares appear before them, and only start to worsen with each passing instant......... Pats his Death Ray I believe the name "Death Ray" is a little of an understatement, but I suppose it will fool those who are struck by it. Walks off, leaving them to their hallucinations
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
*Viola creates a barrier* *Stops you at mid step*
Viola: And I believe that you underestimate the power of us Pokémon. Especially us Gardevoirs. In case you haven't noted, when protecting our trainers we gain powers rivaling the strongest of legendary. Your "death ray" was just a way to ignore that fact.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Dr. X: Their hallucinations are certainly interesting.... However, their nightmares will come, whether it be sooner or later...
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:iconmysticeden:
MysticEden Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Panadol! Siempre util en estas situaciones XD
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hey tu tambien hablas espańol :D
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:iconmysticeden:
MysticEden Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Si :) soy de Puerto Rico. Y tu?
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Veracruz amigo mio
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
This is just brilliant writing. :)
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:iconchinodoll:
chinodoll Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I can promise you...I never laugh so hard in almost a year, thanks men, I started laugh since the first parts and I'm looking very forward for the rest of it ^_^

also: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great recovery! Faith is fully restored
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:iconmrspartin:
MrSpartin Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thank god!
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Best chapter so far!
"Let's fill it with dirt"-man, R34 hasn't even gone that far yet-best innuendo ever!
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
I am still laughing so funny
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:icongodsonvacation:
GodsOnVacation Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
lol ok that's  a relief!
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:iconshieldgenerator7:
shieldgenerator7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
"I decided to use my original plan, but I wanted to execute my another one."

Change to "my other" or just "another"



"By the way, someone actually quessed,"

I believe you mean "asked"


Hope this helps!
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:icongnorian:
Gnorian Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Thank God! You had me worried there. You did pretty well writing this... the self-blame was very well done.
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:iconimageconstructor:
imageconstructor Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Here is a grammar correction: "It just feeld bad..." -> "It just felt bad..."
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
You'll still be back for more, even though you haven't gotten any yet. Just you wait. None can resist the Dash's charms forever.
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:icontyranoman:
Tyranoman Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
"How about I just fill it up with dirt?" Fricking lost it at that panel xD
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:iconhyginustus:
Hyginustus Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student
:iconajliarplz: yes, palying like litel filly
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:iconstrawberryponyartist:
StrawberryPonyArtist Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Case solved
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:iconprincesssummer:
PrincessSummer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Problem solved :swag: my work here is done....... lol
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:icondaisysong907:
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
what a sweetie I mean...
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:icondaisysong907:
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
what sweetie Rainbow is
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:iconjustawriter97:
Justawriter97 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
i've got you a correction:
line 12 image:
Dash talking: "anyway, that's basically what happened"
hope it serves you
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:iconposeyandfluttershy:
poseyandfluttershy Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
lol, can't stop laughting
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:iconangelskarith:
AngelsKarith Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
aww so cute and lyras shocked face is hilarious
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