Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Improving Skills - Part 13 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 13 by BCRich40
I... Want to... Touch Twilight's mane...
Wut?

I love this part. Why? Because there is Twilight Sparkle cutely lying down on the grass. And here's my reaction to cute things:

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW x100


*coughing*

So I'm really satisfied with this part. Of course, I have some minor complains, but let's just ignore them, okay? The last panel was pretty difficult to draw, but I think it turned out okay. I tried something new with the background too! I feel kind of bad for Twilight though...

I have so much else to say about this part, but let's keep it short.

Enjoy!

Oh, and please remember to point out any grammar mistakes you can find. English is not my main language, so there is just about always something to correct.


PART 14

PART 12

PART 1


My Little Pony Hasbro
Add a Comment:
 
:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner 2 days ago
It is Twilight and Rainbow we are talking about here, not even Celestia would be able to stop this from happening if they both wanted it
Reply
:iconnecromancerking85:
NecromancerKing85 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant
HAHAHAHAHAHA This is wrong but I can not stop laughing go Dashie go :)
Reply
:iconmrmeow20:
MrMeow20 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
did Dashie show Twily some outstanding tricks..Them eyebrows England (Laughing) [V3] 
Reply
:iconpinkadiapia:
pinkadiapia Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Are they were cloping
Reply
:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
And that is why people in my family don't drink.
Reply
:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
I really like thier manes like that. And not for the reasons you think, weirdos. Just that they look cute.
Reply
:iconsushero:
sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
 drunk ponis always tell the truth  xD  

but she prefers to stay in the closet     xD    
Reply
:icondakathi666:
Dakathi666 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Oh dear.
Reply
:iconchrismaticfool:
chrismaticfool Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Twilight looks cute.
Reply
:iconkmouse:
kmouse Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Too much dawww :3
Reply
:iconallsmiles98311:
Allsmiles98311 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
 (And this, plus a multitude of other reasons, is why I will never consume alcohol.)
Reply
:iconclubbylia111:
clubbylia111 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
i wonder what happened...You dont wanna know.
Reply
:iconcomeha:
Comeha Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Well...


...that happened.

Oh and D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW x100 + 1
Reply
:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
....
Reply
:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow...
Reply
:iconnicolasdominique:
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like how she's holding her tail ^^
Reply
:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Me too
Reply
:icondawnstarwhooves:
DawnStarWhooves Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My second OC is going to be pissed at rainbow dash
Reply
:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Hehehe~ You know you liked it Twilight~ :3
Reply
:icon0xxinsanityxx0:
0xXInsanityXx0 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
what did Twilight and Rainbowdash do in that bush? ._. ME MUST KNOW!
Reply
:iconghalaghor:
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
i hope she did not lose any brain cells...try to imagine a dumb twilight...
Reply
:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Raven: DAMMIT, DASH! THE DOCTOR'S GONNA COME AFTER YOUR HIDE NOW!
Reply
:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Well it's a good thing Lyra didn't use any violence lol that would have been bad.
Reply
:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why? (x50)

Rapist Dash.
Reply
:iconmikkillerib:
Mikkillerib Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats being drunk in a nutshell.
Reply
:iconwtfomgbbqzzz:
WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Your twilight model is getting really good! I love the frontal perspective you've achieved
Reply
:iconmanoftherift:
ManOfTheRift Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, 13 pages and you've already improved so much. *Watches in awe*
Reply
:icongodsonvacation:
GodsOnVacation Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
that's like Rape yo!
Reply
:icongnorian:
Gnorian Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
OK... I did not expect this to go on to rape territory.
Reply
:iconmafon:
Mafon Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Whoa! Great improvement!
Reply
:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Twilight lying on the grass was pretty cute.

And admit it, you had fun last night. You'll be coming back for more, just you wait. They always want more of the Dash.
Reply
:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
:iconmsrainbowdash::iconsaysplz:Can you blame them?
Reply
:iconpony-berserker:
Pony-Berserker Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, man...
Reply
:iconhappygnomeland1:
Happygnomeland1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Awww, so cute! Haha, this made me laugh.
Reply
:iconstrawberryponyartist:
StrawberryPonyArtist Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Poor Twi
Reply
:iconprincesssummer:
PrincessSummer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Twilight i will give you a hug:cheer up hug: 
Reply
:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
D'aww! That icon is so cute! :happybounce:
Reply
:iconprincesssummer:
PrincessSummer Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Artist
Hahaha you're right about that one
Reply
:iconmaskenemy:
maskenemy Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahah lmfao
Reply
:icondaisysong907:
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
poor Twilight :(
Reply
:iconhellomuffykitty:
HelloMuffykitty Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg XD im loving this
Reply
:iconbrainbow-dash:
Brainbow-Dash Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Thnax for this wonderful story.
Its my favorite part too!
Reply
:iconrainponyartist:
RainPonyArtist Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
XDD
Reply
:iconpaxiya:
Paxiya Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
RDs face :D
Reply
:iconblackwidower:
BlackWidower Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Love the final frame!
Reply
:iconhors1988:
Hors1988 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Incomodo a mas de uno nos paso jajajaja
Reply
:iconjesslyoko324:
jesslyoko324 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
eww thats sick there all girls!!!!
Reply
:iconsorinmysticrush:
SorinMysticRush Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GET SOME!
Reply
:icongrimreeper2121:
grimreeper2121 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OK i ust say that your skills have improved and i think that in the future you should consider changing this from a "improving skills" comic to just a full fan fic comic just a thought
Reply
:icontemporos:
temporos Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa! :O_o: You dramatically improved between parts 12 and 13!
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×
Download JPG 1024 × 4574




Details

Submitted on
September 9, 2012
Image Size
2.0 MB
Resolution
1024×4574
Submitted with
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
35,524 (2 today)
Favourites
360 (who?)
Comments
104
Downloads
281
×