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Improving Skills - Part 12 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 12 by BCRich40
I didn't take a very long time to make this. I still didn't manage to update the style to my current skill level, but it doesn't matter! It's still my best comic so far, because of the first panel. It always makes me smile.

Backgrounds are still a problem. They're mess! I need to find a way improve them. I haven't found that right style yet. Another major problem is panels. They're just stacked. I tried to change their shape, but it was impossible. It's because of my style to draw sketches. I need to think a better way...

And please, point out any grammar mistakes you can find! English is not my main language, so there is always something to correct.


PART 13

PART 11

PART 1


My Little Pony Hasbro
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:iconilovemyfavoritegames:
ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Um, I think it should be tagged with mature content(sexual themes).
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:iconthe-mysterious-ponyx:
the-mysterious-ponyX Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
its gettin hot in here
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Take it easy Lyra, it is not like Dash is gonna wake up in her room and noticing her wallet and clothes are gone
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:iconnorad2terran:
norad2terran Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
You know there's a really popular story on Fimfiction where Twilight sings that song. I think that chapter was written after this, so it probably wasn't the inspiration for this.
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:iconthathappyfellow:
ThatHappyFellow Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
Hahaha "and horses are funny..."
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:iconilovemyfavoritegames:
ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
it's a trap >8(
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:iconmanafox101:
ManaFox101 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Last Panel.
Is.
The.
SHIT!
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:iconkotkadxx:
kotkadxx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
xD?
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:iconpinkiepie-partypony:
PinkiePie-PartyPony Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!! <3333
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:iconmylittleponyrocksand:
It won't show me anything when I tap the comic to zoom in. I can't read it.
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Is it really going to happen?
Not even a quater of the way through and already this has started. You work fast.
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:iconkatthecat2602:
katthecat2602 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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:iconsushero:
sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
lol  i dont now  why almost all the  ponis are gay  =/
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:iconlordkane666:
LordKane666 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
I do like a good trick.....
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:iconelizabethcool:
Elizabethcool Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student
LOL!TWILIGT NOT :D
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:iconchaosdrgon:
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
:iconadmiralackbarplz::iconsaysplz:It's a trap!:iconsaysendplz:
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:icondante-wynter:
Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
"Think rationally" and Rainbow Dash have never gone together.
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
laughs so true she's never been rational.
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:iconzeroxee:
Zeroxee Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
uh oh.
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:icontwily469:
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I said that...
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:iconzeroxee:
Zeroxee Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
Then we're two...
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:iconmangainlove:
maNgainlove Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Now , we're three.
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:iconroadieturbo:
RoadieTurbo Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
lol nah I'll join the band wagon and make it four. XD
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:iconcyborgebolt:
cyborgebolt Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i may have been beaten,but im still gona say it :iconitsatrapplz::iconsaysplz: ITS A FUCKING TRAP!!!
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:iconblackshadow6202:
BlackShadow6202 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ono awww, you beat me to it...oh, what the hay? XD

:iconitsatrapplz: :iconsaysplz: IT'S A TRAP!

X3
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:iconcyborgebolt:
cyborgebolt Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconitsatrapplz::iconsaysplz:.....:iconsays2plz::iconitsatrapplz:
:iconsays3plz:ITS A TRAAAAP!!:iconsays4plz:
:iconstormtrooperplz::iconsaysplz::iconwhattheshitplz:
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:iconghalaghor:
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
im ok with this ship.
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:iconellycooarts:
EllyCooArts Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really improved alright...
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I really like that song as well. And the band name, in case anypony was wondering, is 
:iconbronyplz::iconsaysplz:America!
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:iconwilson8787:
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
I love how RD and Lyra have the exact same expression in panel 4 :D
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:iconmuddyfudger:
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
R34! Its a trap!
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love that song.
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:iconherooftime1996:
HeroOfTime1996 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Like this comic so far, nostalgia for the song you chose :)
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:iconfirestorm310:
firestorm310 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Lol yes bad dash think of AJ
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:iconxormak:
xormak Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...
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:iconmaelstrom44:
Maelstrom44 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
:iconitsatrapplz::iconsaysplz:ITS A TRAP!
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:iconmikkillerib:
Mikkillerib Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn it, you beat me to it.
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:iconmaelstrom44:
Maelstrom44 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
I was beaten with the idea below, but i was the 1st to execute it perfectly
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:iconcuchulin:
Cuchulin Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Love the song you chose for Twilight to sing!
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:icongodsonvacation:
GodsOnVacation Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I thought the lyrics were ... 'In the desert you can't remember your name,  'Cause there ain't no one for to give you no fame.'? 
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:iconozpakko:
ozpakko Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn it.
Now that song is stuck in my head. And so GTA San Andreas.
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:iconsiarnaq21:
Siarnaq21 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"You know Lyra... that's a really tempting offer..."
*Twilight
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Just imagine I said all the dirty things about that song. There's too many options, in this context. I can't bear to pick one or two over all the others. It wouldn't be fair.

And just because you know it's a trap doesn't mean you can avoid walking right into it. Not when the bait is so tempting . . .
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:iconastrofan1993:
astrofan1993 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
I love that song.  The 70s had some of the best music of our time.
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:iconmatau99:
Matau99 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
:iconitsatrapplz:
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:iconstrawberryponyartist:
StrawberryPonyArtist Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
So many memes
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:icongroundedgypsy:
GroundedGypsy Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student General Artist
ITSATRAPLOL
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:iconprincesssummer:
PrincessSummer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Don't do it Dash 
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:iconshardstar3:
shardstar3 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS A TRAP!
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