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Improving Skills - Part 11 by BCRich40 Improving Skills - Part 11 by BCRich40
It took a month, but I finally did it!



I laughed my ass off when I was checking ready panels in the end. Anatomy of ponies keeps changing so much. Dialogue is pretty bad, backgrounds are just a mess etc.

And my computer almost died when I was combining all the panels together. I mean, height of the final image was about 25500 pixels, so I had to scale it down a bit.

At the same time, I'm proud of this. It's my largest work so far! I spent so many hours in front of the screen just drawing this.

And please, point out every grammar mistake you can find. English is not my main language, so there's always something to fix. I'll fix them soon as possible.




My Little Pony © Hasbro
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sora765 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
why twilight oh well at least its only one time i hope i don't want my top 2 favorite ponies bucked up by alcohol
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
best to show than explain
LittleJackiePapercut Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Unless Twilight is a bigger lightweight than Doc Brown, I don't think one mug of cider would even have a noticeable effect.

Also what does she mean she thought the alcohol made Dash say those things, she didn't know what alcohol WAS five minutes ago
baileyjrob Featured By Owner Edited Sep 13, 2015
But now she DOES know.
LittleJackiePapercut Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
But THEN she didn't.
baileyjrob Featured By Owner Edited Sep 16, 2015
Maybe not, but it was clear something was wrong. She could have determined she wasn't in her right mind, and assigned alcohol as the culprit in post.
the-mysterious-ponyX Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh nooooooo! booze
GwDuncan Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
Wow, never thought I would see Twilight ask for a drink:o
norad2terran Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
Suddenly: epic improvement.
Nyerguds Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
Hah. Twilight is all "screw this, I need a drink" :XD:
kotkadxx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Serefin99 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Twilight! NO!
sushero Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
BRO THE COMic is very good  more than a lot of comics so just more work and you  can become in to a master
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
987654321o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
oh no!
Elizabethcool Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student
Rabow dont Sure
maNgainlove Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Let the ship begin!
Twily469 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I said daaaw until Twilight said "but your best part its your fla..." I totally understod
ChaosDrgon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
I sense an impending 'drunk Sheldon' moment coming.
Dante-Wynter Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
It does not look horrible! And I love this comic! Reading all the way through it, even though I should go to bed . . .
dervonnebenaan Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Oh mane, I' only halfway through the comic and already now I can say this is one of my favourites. This is so brilliant in so many ways! The idea! The humor! Great!
AppleDash4eves Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
I'm not a TwiDash shipper (as you can see by me name) but that was cute! Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Cadence Clapping Pony Icon - Fluttershy Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Clapping Pony Icon - Rarity Clapping Pony Icon - Applejack Clapping Pony Icon - Changeling Clapping Pony Icon - Nightmare Moon Clapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie Clapping Pony Icon - Vinyl Scratch Clapping Pony Icon - Queen Chrysalis Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Celestia Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle Clapping Pony Icon - Trixie Clapping Pony Icon - Lightning Dust Clapping Pony Icon - Instructor Uniform Clapping Pony Icon - Soarin Clapping Pony Icon - Spitfire Clapping Pony Icon - Soarin - Wonderbolt Uniform Clapping Pony Icon - Thunderlane Clapping Pony Icon - Babs Seed Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Belle Clapping Pony Icon - Spitfire - Wonderbolt Uniform 
Comedic44 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ghalaghor Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
do you even ship?
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Looks like the possibility of some :icontwidashplz: here in the future. :)
MuddyFudger Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This does NOT look horrible. Its actually pretty awesome at this point. And the story is great as well, although is seems to be walking the R34 line.
lunastudios90 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Este comic me encanta. esto no solo a demostrado tu talento en el arte. si no, tambien tu originalidad para crear historias :D te acabo de echar una flor enorme pero la verdad, te la mereces. 
warlord487 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
The TwiDashian in me loves this.
moonsugar33 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Second-last panel says "acohol" instead of "alcohol". :)
BCRich40 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just great... I don't have the program I used to make this comic anymore, so that's a tricky typo to correct. I don't even remember what was the font I used.
xormak Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
actually it's easy:
take any program(for this example Gimp), color the area with the wrong word white, mark and copy the former "alcohol" and paste it in. voilá
Gnorian Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
This seems to be heading directly at shipping territory. Not sure whether to keep reading, or abandon ship.
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Twi, you are always the only sane pony, when there is any sane pony at all.

Also, alcohol is not the answer. Unless it leads to sloppy makeouts with Dash.
PrincessSummer Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Artist
Hmmmmmm now I wonder what she will say Devilish 
DaisySong907 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
oh no /).(\
AuthorNumber2 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013   Digital Artist
And nothing good can come from this except one thing: don't drink cider unless its non-alcholic.
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
xD "I'll just demonstrate for u, CAN I HAVE A MUG OF ALCOHOLIC CIDER PLZ?!" xD and of course like always... RD IS LEZ! WHAT IS THE DEALLLL this is a good comic though :D
BrokenGrayHeart Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I won't like whats going to happen, but shit just interesting.
RoboKitty Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Ah, so "In Vino Veritas" was in full effect
( [link] for explanation)
SonicFull Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
You spouses and looks horrible to the plot the correct words are this sounds like a very very very very bad a bad idea. I perceive things are going to be, horrible later! Have your talking about the artwork looks fantastic.
catz537 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Panel 3: Have Twi say "Soon we won't see anything" instead of "Soon we can't see anything" Panel 5: Twi should say "I think he's not that bad of a person after all" instead of "I think he's not a that bad" Panel 8: Lyra should say "I'd better find a place where I can fill this canteen" instead of "I better to find a place" and Twilight should say "You could just ask for more water from" instead of that without the word "for". Panel 14: Twi should say "I never told you how beautiful your eyes are" instead of "I never told you how beautiful eyes you have" Panel 15: Twi "They look sharp as a sword" instead of "sharp as sword" This part of the comic is very good :)
Madnoke Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"There's many interesting things mentioned, but *none* of them *will*help " I hope that helps :) and by the way well done you've just got yourself another watcher :D this just keeps getting better :)
BCRich40 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fixed! Thank you!
Madnoke Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no problem, i'm glad i could help :)
awesomeguy888 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
cant wait for part 12!!!
wowcantdraw Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
this is going to get interesting
Dude, this is fun. I'm really enjoying it. Thanks much!
decoherence Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just read all of these from the start up to now and loved it. It's just :iconso-awesomeplz: where's that watch button??
decoherence Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I'm already watching you! No wonder! lol
lostzilla Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist
dont ever stop this comic , fucking funny
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